The following paragraph has thirteen pronoun errors (including the one that has been edited for you). 2. (1) Imagine this situation; a biker hits a pothole and flies from her she bike, landing on the sidewalk. (2) Clearly, her is injured. (3) Whom would help her, and whom would stand on the sidelines? (4) A research team has investigated these questions, and their answers are quite interesting. (5) First, witnesses who feel positive or fortunate are more likely to help than those experiencing more negative emotions, (6) Also, witnesses who are feeling guilty about something may be more likely to help, perhaps to make up for the act that prompted their guilt. (7) It could stem from anything - from a dishonest act at work to a fight with a friend. (8) Finally, if you see others who are willing to help, you are more likely to come to a stranger's aid than if you are a lone witness. (9) It might inspire witnesses to act. (10) My personal experience suggests that these observations are true. (11) Once, my husband and me saw a pedestrian get bumped by a car. (12) We had just had a disagreement, and me, personally, was feeling guilty. (13) Also, we saw another person coming to the pedestrian's aid. (14) In seconds, the two of us ran to help. (15) The other person arrived at the scene faster than us, but we were all able to help. (16) Fortunately, the pedestrian had experienced only minor injuries. (17) Based on this experience and the research findings, I conclude that everybody has the ability to help their fellow citizens. (18) Some of us are just more motivated than others, for various reasons.

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Imagine this situation; a biker hits a pothole and flies from her bike, landing on the sidewalk. Clearly, she is injured. Who would help her, and who would stand on the sidelines? A research team has investigated these questions, and their answers are quite interesting. First, witnesses who feel positive or fortunate are more likely to help than those experiencing more negative emotions. Also, witnesses who are feeling guilty about something may be more likely to help, perhaps to make up for the act that prompted their guilt. It could stem from anything - from a dishonest act at work to a fight with a friend. Finally, if you see others who are willing to help, you are more likely to come to a stranger's aid than if you are a lone witness. It might inspire witnesses to act. My personal experience suggests that these observations are true. Once, my husband and I saw a pedestrian get bumped by a car. We had just had a disagreement, and I personally was feeling guilty. Also, we saw another person coming to the pedestrian's aid. In seconds, the two of us ran to help. The other person arrived at the scene faster than we did, but we were all able to help. Fortunately, the pedestrian had experienced only minor injuries. Based on this experience and the research findings, I conclude that everybody has the ability to help their fellow citizens. Some of us are just more motivated than others, for various reasons.

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