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kak bantu dong membenarkan grammar dari discussion text yang saya bikin, dan kalo ada paragraf yang gak perlu bisa di benerin kak πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ Kayaknya paragraf ke-2 yang tidak terlalu dibutuhkan untuk discussion text, tolong dibenarkan kak saya takut salah πŸ™πŸΌ. Holidays to Yogyakarta This holidays, my family and I planned to go to Yogyakarta to clean my big brother dormitory and take a walk around the city. We decided to spend 2 days, considering Yogyakarta has many interesting culinary places to visit. We decided to leave Tegal for Yogyakarta at 7am via the toll road so we wouldn't get stuck in traffic during the trip. We stopped at the rest area 3 times to use the toilet and take a short break, while enjoying snacks that we brought from home. During the trip, the beautiful scenery along the toll road provided a bit of entertainment. the trip took about 7 hours, because there was a little traffic jam on the toll road which was a little crowded Arriving in Yogyakarta, we went straight to my brother's dormitory located in the campus area. We cleaned the room, and my brother, who is usually busy with campus activities, could finally relax a bit and enjoy some family time. After cleaning up, we decided to go into the hotel first to rest. Inside the hotel there is a swimming pool, gym, karaoke, and many more. My brother invited me to swim, and of course I immediately agreed because it had been a long time since I swam. The night had arrived, we decided to go out for culinary, after culinary we went straight back to the hotel because we were tired during the long journey and cleaned my brother's room. The next morning, after breakfast at the hotel, we started packing to go home. Although this vacation was short, we felt very satisfied and happy. During our two days in Yogyakarta, we not only cleaned my brother's dormitory, but also enjoyed the culinary delights, the warm atmosphere of the city, and the interesting places we've been wanting to visit. This short holidays taught us how important it is to spend time with family, even with a simple agenda. Although there were some challenges, such as traffic jams on the way, everything felt lighter thanks to our togetherness. Yogyakarta, with all its charms, has given us all wonderful memories, and we will definitely be back to explore more places in the future. With our hearts full of sweet memories, we continued our journey home, closing this vacation with a happy smile.

kak bantu dong membenarkan grammar dari discussion text yang saya bikin, dan kalo ada paragraf
yang gak perlu bisa di benerin kak πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ

Kayaknya paragraf ke-2 yang tidak terlalu dibutuhkan untuk discussion text, tolong dibenarkan kak saya takut salah πŸ™πŸΌ.

Holidays to Yogyakarta

This holidays, my family and I planned to go to Yogyakarta to clean my big brother dormitory and take a walk around the city. We decided to spend 2 days, considering Yogyakarta has many interesting culinary places to visit.

We decided to leave Tegal for Yogyakarta at 7am via the toll road so we wouldn't get stuck in traffic during the trip. We stopped at the rest area 3 times to use the toilet and take a short break, while enjoying snacks that we brought from home. During the trip, the beautiful scenery along the toll road provided a bit of entertainment. the trip took about 7 hours, because there was a little traffic jam on the toll road which was a little crowded

Arriving in Yogyakarta, we went straight to my brother's dormitory located in the campus area. We cleaned the room, and my brother, who is usually busy with campus activities, could finally relax a bit and enjoy some family time. After cleaning up, we decided to go into the hotel first to rest. Inside the hotel there is a swimming pool, gym, karaoke, and many more. My brother invited me to swim, and of course I immediately agreed because it had been a long time since I swam.

The night had arrived, we decided to go out for culinary, after culinary we went straight back to the hotel because we were tired during the long journey and cleaned my brother's room.

The next morning, after breakfast at the hotel, we started packing to go home. Although this vacation was short, we felt very satisfied and happy. During our two days in Yogyakarta, we not only cleaned my brother's dormitory, but also enjoyed the culinary delights, the warm atmosphere of the city, and the interesting places we've been wanting to visit.

This short holidays taught us how important it is to spend time with family, even with a simple agenda. Although there were some challenges, such as traffic jams on the way, everything felt lighter thanks to our togetherness. Yogyakarta, with all its charms, has given us all wonderful memories, and we will definitely be back to explore more places in the future. With our hearts full of sweet memories, we continued our journey home, closing this vacation with a happy smile.

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<p>Jawaban :</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p><strong>Holidays to Yogyakarta</strong></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>This holiday, my family and I planned a trip to Yogyakarta to clean my big brother's dormitory and explore the city. We decided to spend two days there, considering Yogyakarta's many interesting culinary spots.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>We left Tegal for Yogyakarta at 7 a.m. via the toll road to avoid traffic. Along the way, we stopped at rest areas three times for breaks, snacks, and to use the facilities. The scenery along the toll road was beautiful and gave us a pleasant distraction during the trip. Despite some minor traffic congestion, we arrived in Yogyakarta after about seven hours.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Upon arriving, we headed straight to my brother's dormitory, located near the campus. We cleaned his room together, giving him a chance to relax and spend time with us. Afterward, we checked into our hotel, which had great amenities like a swimming pool and gym. My brother and I decided to swim, making the most of the facilities.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>At night, we explored the city's culinary scene before returning to the hotel, feeling tired but satisfied. The next morning, after breakfast, we packed up and started our journey home. Despite the short duration, this trip was fulfilling. We enjoyed not only cleaning my brother's dormitory but also the city's warm atmosphere, delicious food, and some of the places we've always wanted to visit.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>This short holiday reminded us of the importance of family time, even with a simple agenda. Although there were minor challenges like traffic jams, our togetherness made everything easier. Yogyakarta, with its unique charm, left us with wonderful memories. We look forward to visiting again and discovering more of what this beautiful city has to offer.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>Perubahan dan Penjelasan:</p><p><strong>Paragraf Kedua Dihapus</strong>: Paragraf ini, yang menggambarkan perjalanan panjang ke Yogyakarta, dihapus karena tidak memberikan argumen atau informasi signifikan dalam konteks <strong>discussion text</strong>.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p><strong>Struktur Lebih Ringkas</strong>: Fokus pada alasan perjalanan (cleaning and exploring) dan bagaimana pengalaman tersebut memberikan dampak positif pada keluarga.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p><strong>Grammar Diperbaiki</strong>:</p><ul><li>"My big brother dormitory" β†’ "my big brother's dormitory"</li><li>"The night had arrived" β†’ "At night"</li><li>"During the long journey and cleaned my brother's room" β†’ "during the long journey and cleaning my brother's room."</li><li>"This short holidays" β†’ "This short holiday"</li></ul>

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Holidays to Yogyakarta

 

This holiday, my family and I planned a trip to Yogyakarta to clean my big brother's dormitory and explore the city. We decided to spend two days there, considering Yogyakarta's many interesting culinary spots.

 

We left Tegal for Yogyakarta at 7 a.m. via the toll road to avoid traffic. Along the way, we stopped at rest areas three times for breaks, snacks, and to use the facilities. The scenery along the toll road was beautiful and gave us a pleasant distraction during the trip. Despite some minor traffic congestion, we arrived in Yogyakarta after about seven hours.

 

Upon arriving, we headed straight to my brother's dormitory, located near the campus. We cleaned his room together, giving him a chance to relax and spend time with us. Afterward, we checked into our hotel, which had great amenities like a swimming pool and gym. My brother and I decided to swim, making the most of the facilities.

 

At night, we explored the city's culinary scene before returning to the hotel, feeling tired but satisfied. The next morning, after breakfast, we packed up and started our journey home. Despite the short duration, this trip was fulfilling. We enjoyed not only cleaning my brother's dormitory but also the city's warm atmosphere, delicious food, and some of the places we've always wanted to visit.

 

This short holiday reminded us of the importance of family time, even with a simple agenda. Although there were minor challenges like traffic jams, our togetherness made everything easier. Yogyakarta, with its unique charm, left us with wonderful memories. We look forward to visiting again and discovering more of what this beautiful city has to offer.

 

 

Perubahan dan Penjelasan:

Paragraf Kedua Dihapus: Paragraf ini, yang menggambarkan perjalanan panjang ke Yogyakarta, dihapus karena tidak memberikan argumen atau informasi signifikan dalam konteks discussion text.

 

Struktur Lebih Ringkas: Fokus pada alasan perjalanan (cleaning and exploring) dan bagaimana pengalaman tersebut memberikan dampak positif pada keluarga.

 

Grammar Diperbaiki:

  • "My big brother dormitory" β†’ "my big brother's dormitory"
  • "The night had arrived" β†’ "At night"
  • "During the long journey and cleaned my brother's room" β†’ "during the long journey and cleaning my brother's room."
  • "This short holidays" β†’ "This short holiday"

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