Claudia K
30 September 2024 02:58
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SMA-Bahasa Inggris-Kelas 11-KURMER
Tolong buatkan teks argumentasi mengenai "Exploitation of natural resources is a major problem in Indonesia" dengan struktur AREL (Argument, Reasoning, Evidance and Link Back) dengan minimal kata 280
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Maulana A
30 September 2024 11:05
Argument:
Exploitation of natural resources is a major problem in Indonesia, leading to severe environmental degradation and long-term economic consequences.
Reasoning:
Indonesia is rich in natural resources such as forests, minerals, and oil. However, the exploitation of these resources has often been done irresponsibly. Activities like illegal logging, mining, and deforestation occur at alarming rates, driven by economic interests without regard for sustainability. This unchecked exploitation not only harms the environment but also depletes the resources that future generations depend on.
The uncontrolled extraction of natural resources leads to deforestation, which causes soil erosion, loss of biodiversity, and increased greenhouse gas emissions. Deforestation in Indonesia, for example, contributes to habitat loss for endangered species such as orangutans, tigers, and rhinos. Furthermore, mining practices, especially in areas like Kalimantan and Papua, have led to water pollution and the destruction of local ecosystems.
In the long term, this will negatively affect Indonesia’s economy as reliance on non-renewable resources leads to a lack of diversification. Once the resources are depleted, the economic benefits will vanish, leaving behind environmental damage that is costly to repair.
Evidence:
According to a report from Greenpeace, Indonesia loses about 1.6 million hectares of forest annually due to illegal logging and land conversion for palm oil plantations. This has resulted in Indonesia being one of the world’s largest contributors to deforestation-related carbon emissions. Additionally, data from Indonesia’s Ministry of Environment and Forestry reveals that nearly 30% of Indonesia’s landmass has been affected by mining activities, causing widespread environmental damage.
Link Back:
Therefore, the exploitation of natural resources presents a significant issue for Indonesia, not only harming the environment but also risking the country's long-term sustainability. To address this, it is essential for Indonesia to enforce stricter regulations, promote sustainable practices, and prioritize the conservation of its natural wealth. Failure to do so will lead to further environmental destruction and economic instability in the future.
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Claudia K
30 September 2024 14:49
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Aqila Z
02 Oktober 2024 02:38
Exploitation of Natural Resources is a Big Problem in Indonesia
Argument: The exploitation of natural resources is a serious issue in Indonesia, causing environmental destruction and negative impacts on local communities. While Indonesia is rich in natural resources, the uncontrolled use of these resources leads to harmful environmental consequences and risks the well-being of future generations.
Reasoning: Industries such as mining, logging, and palm oil plantations are the biggest contributors to resource exploitation. Although these industries provide economic benefits like jobs and revenue, they cause lasting environmental harm. Forests are cut down, water sources are polluted, and wildlife habitats are destroyed, creating long-term damage. Overexploitation of these resources also threatens the sustainability of the environment, as the natural balance is disturbed. If this continues, future generations may not have access to the same resources we have today.
Evidence: Data from the World Bank shows that Indonesia loses over 1.17 million hectares of forest each year due to illegal logging and the expansion of palm oil plantations. This deforestation is a major contributor to climate change, as Indonesia has become one of the largest emitters of carbon dioxide. Additionally, mining activities cause severe water pollution, as toxic chemicals such as mercury are released into rivers. A report by WALHI (Indonesian Forum for Environment) highlights the increased health risks faced by communities living near mining sites, as they rely on polluted water for daily needs.
Link Back: In conclusion, the exploitation of natural resources may provide short-term economic growth, but the long-term environmental damage cannot be ignored. It is crucial for Indonesia to adopt more sustainable practices and stricter regulations to protect its natural resources. This will ensure that economic development does not come at the expense of environmental destruction, allowing future generations to thrive.
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